
In this week's Weekly Presentation Coaching episode Wynn Newingham submits a new presentation for review and asks a fantastic second question!
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Sam, welcome back to B and I and the Power of One. We are back with our weekly presentation coaching episodes where we are reviewing your submitted weekly presentations for review in an attempt to make them more effective or, or as effective as possible. And so I'm just pulling on my timer as I talk here. Real quick. Today we are going to hear from Wynn Newingham. Win is a member in our region in Victory Lane. So this is a two part question that ties into my weekly presentation review a few weeks ago. And this has been a little bit. We gave great tips on the podcast, been working to apply them. It's not perfect, but you mentioned I could have it reviewed again with your tips. So here I'm. Here I am putting myself out there in the marketing consultancy for BNI Victory Lane. We get 60 seconds. My updated weekly presentation is below. So and then the second part is a question around. All right, so I'm gonna do when I'm gonna do the weekly presentation first and I'll get to part two on this. So two part episode for everybody, part of a weekly presentation review and then a little bit of coaching on one of the parts that make up a weekly presentation. So when I got my timer out again, I'm gonna time it. You and I will do this at different speeds the first time I'm reading this, but it'll give us a point of reference. So here we go. Hello everyone. I'm Win Newingham with Tussle Marketing, a marketing consulting firm designed to make hustles, not marketing hassles. This week I'm. I've been working with a law firm to improve their social media presence by writing scripts and editing content for reels, YouTube shorts and TikTok. We're not the legal experts, but we know how to get their content seen, shared and engaged with turning their knowledge into marketing that actually works. Just this week, we helped create a series of short form videos on estate planning and timeshares, making legal topics digestible and engaging for their audience. I'd love to do the same for Hill and Hill, law firm owned by Thomas and Daniel Hill. Lawyers are experts in the courtroom, but marketing themselves online, that's where we come in. Here's how you can help. If you're talking to Thomas or Daniel, just ask, how's your marketing going? If they hesitate or say it's not where they want it to be, let them know you have a marketing guru who can take it off their plate. I'd love the opportunity to connect with them and help build their social media into something that drives Real results. Thanks for keeping them in mind. Okay, so that went 56 and a half seconds. So pretty close. Pretty close to a minute. Generally, I like what you're doing here. You've got a good example of what you're doing right now. It's very specific to law firms, which is perfect. You've got a very specific referral request. And Thomas and Daniel Hill, which is great. I'll give you a couple little tweaks. That's it. And these are just like, nitpicking tweaks. I think you're pretty much right online. All right. I'd love to do the same for Hill. Hill Law Firm. I would just tweak this to say I would like to work with other law firms such as Hill and Hill Law Firm, owned by Thomas and Daniel Hill just gives the words to that. You're open to any law firm. Lawyers are experts in the courtroom, but marketing themselves online, that's where I come in. Here's how you can help. If you're talking with Thomas or Daniel, just ask, how's your marketing going? Okay, I would change this slightly. Now you can do this question. So if you say, if you're talking to your friend who's a lawyer, or if you know Thomas and Daniel directly, ask them how their marketing's going. And if they hesitate or complain, let them know you. You. I would say let them know you work with somebody who can help them take that off their plate. Gurus just, I don't know. That's up to you. I wouldn't use that word, but that's up to you. Another way to approach it would be to say something like, hey, when you're talking to your friend who's a lawyer, or if you know Thomas and Daniel.
Title: BNI 817: Weekly Presentation Coaching 134 - Wynn Newingham - Marketing
Host: Tim Roberts
Release Date: May 9, 2025
In Episode 817 of the BNI & The Power of One podcast, host Tim Roberts delves into the art of enhancing weekly presentations within BNI (Business Network International) groups. This particular episode focuses on providing personalized coaching to member Wynn Newingham from Victory Lane, emphasizing effective marketing strategies to increase referrals and elevate BNI membership performance.
Tim Roberts begins the session by welcoming listeners and introducing the format of the episode: a two-part coaching session aimed at refining weekly presentations for maximum impact. He highlights that this episode will feature Wynn's submitted presentation, with a focus on marketing consultancy.
Wynn Newingham presents his updated weekly presentation:
"Hello everyone. I'm Win Newingham with Tussle Marketing, a marketing consulting firm designed to make hustles, not marketing hassles. This week I've been working with a law firm to improve their social media presence by writing scripts and editing content for reels, YouTube shorts, and TikTok..."
[00:45]
In his presentation, Wynn showcases his expertise in transforming complex legal topics into engaging social media content. He emphasizes the tangible results achieved for his clients, such as increased engagement and visibility through short-form videos on platforms like TikTok and YouTube Shorts.
Key Points:
Tim Roberts commends Wynn on his clear and specific presentation:
"Generally, I like what you're doing here. You've got a good example of what you're doing right now. It's very specific to law firms, which is perfect. You've got a very specific referral request, and Thomas and Daniel Hill, which is great."
[04:15]
He offers constructive feedback to refine Wynn’s presentation further:
Inclusivity in Referral Requests:
Enhancing the Call to Action:
Language Refinement:
Notable Quote:
"These are just like, nitpicking tweaks. I think you're pretty much right online."
[05:00]
Tim’s Coaching Highlights:
After the initial feedback, Tim demonstrates the implementation of his suggestions by rephrasing parts of Wynn’s presentation. This live revision serves as a practical example for listeners on how to apply coaching tips effectively.
Revised Presentation Snippet:
"If you're talking to your friend who's a lawyer, or if you know Thomas and Daniel directly, ask them how their marketing's going. And if they hesitate or complain, let them know you work with someone who can help them take that off their plate."
Closing Insights:
This episode of BNI & The Power of One serves as a valuable resource for BNI members seeking to elevate their weekly presentations and marketing strategies. Tim Roberts provides insightful coaching that is both practical and directly applicable, empowering members like Wynn Newingham to harness the "Power of One" for greater business success.